Part 1.
Khanak had been sitting inside the college canteen, waiting
for her masala chai, to arrive. The canteen boy was taking an unusually, long
time as the crowd was heavy today.
In general, the college canteen had a higher occupancy than
any of the classes in the much coveted Sri Venkateswara College of Engineering,
Hyderabad . But
today, it was something special. One of the spoilt brats from a rich family was
celebrating his birthday and giving treat to almost everyone he knew.
Khanak bypassed everyone and went to take her favourite seat
at the last corner, by the window. This was always empty and no one wanted to
take this seat….even if the canteen was full….. There were many reasons for it
being the neglected one….
It was secluded, separated by rest of the canteen by a small
3 feet wall, was wooden, as compared to other cushioned seats inside the
canteen, was far from the food counter and was small……meant for 2 people
sitting facing each other….. It was a strange, dingy place inside the remote
corner of the canteen, beyond a sharp turn at the 3 feet wall and people found
it depressing. So no one wanted it, much to Khanak’s relief, as she loved it.
And she always sat there.
She sat on the seat and looked outside the window. A gush of
cool breeze hit her face and dried the tear droplets that had rolled down on
her cheek. She wiped them and in a hopeless bid to distract herself, she started counting the water droplets that
fell in form of rain drops on the small puddle of water, just outside the main
door, beside the grass laden path for people on foot.
*Tip….Tap*
The water droplets hit the pool of water and immersed
themselves in that bigger universe, becoming a part of it, losing their own
identity and surrendering to the vastness of a being.
Another stream was let out by Khanak’s eyes yet again and
she wondered if they wanted to compete with the drops of rain outside the window.
She had been holding a pen in her hand which she used to scratch on the wooden
table near the place where her elbow rested. Her hand on her cheek supported
her while other sketched on the table. She couldn’t talk to her friends about
her problem, so she found a friend as the secluded wooden table, who had no
option other than listening to her unspoken plight, watch her cry and be a
support by letting her elbow rest on it and letting her pen scratch it.
She drew two lonely eyes, with long pretty lashes and tears
dropping from the eye.
After having her chai, she stood up and left the canteen
with heavy steps.
The table stayed isolated, secluded, quiet witness to her
misery, for a long time...almost an hour. And it seemed everyone hated it and avoided it too. Except one guy, who entered the canteen, specifically
looking for that table and headed straight towards it.
“Shantanu, I hate that table, you know that.” His friend Jatin stopped
him by tugging on his bag.
“And you know that I love it, so why do you always have to
nag ?”
“Let’s sit at a better, cheerful place. ”
“And how will you smoke there ? The Profs are going to catch
hold of you and throw you out.”
“Shitttt man !! I didn’t realise.”
Shantanu gave a royal smug look to him, victoriously shrugged
and headed for his favourite table and seat. He dumped the bag that he had been
carrying on the table, which by the stroke of luck, fell to lie over the drawing made
by Khanak and hid it. Shaan sat on the seat occupied previously by Khanak,
while Jatin sat facing him.
He watched outside the window and observed the same puddle
which had now become a muddy stretch coz of drainage of water and gathering of
dust and dry-wet leaves over it.
“Why don’t they clean this stretch ?” Jatin asked.
“When you become GS, do it.” Shantanu answered non-chalantly,
very casually, while lighting his cigarette.
“You don’t need to become GS to clean filth. Someone will
slip there and get hurt. We should get it cleaned. Let’s get hold of the sweeper and
get it done, right away.”
“Finish the cigarette first !”
“Obviously……”
They had coffee and bread pakora with the regular dose of
two cigarettes and stood up. Shantanu picked up his bag and placed it over his
shoulder in a well rehearsed manner and started to make a move. And just when he was about to start moving,
the two mysterious eyes drawn on the table, caught his attention.
The wooden table has been personified very thoughtfully :)
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful....so want to read ahead!! Please update soon..its very interesting and mysterious!! The drawing she made and the way you described that place at the canteen was very nice.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Shweta :)
DeleteAwesummm...really luking forward to it...!!
ReplyDeleteThat was nice...
ReplyDeleteThe first part revealed nothing about the story....I m wondering how it will end in 4 parts...
Khanak n Shaan know each other?? He smokes? Ugh !!
Why was Khanak soo depressed...
Hmm...however different they are....The table is the connecting factor....I think this is the central prop for this SS !!
Intriguing di..:) Awww..Khanak is crying..And Shaan too came and sat in the table and he saw her drawing..Destiny bringing them closer!!! :D
ReplyDeleteLooking forward and thanks for writing a beautiful update di..:)
And you have included the drawing too..Cool!!! Did you draw this di???
ReplyDeleteLoved the start. Didnt got the much idea about their personalities yet but waiting to read more. Loved the drawing too.....Superb!!!
ReplyDeleteContinue soon :)
Here "The Table" is going to be a connector..loved the update but waiting for it to get unfold.. brilliant explanation of both Khanak's and Shaan's scenes..
ReplyDeleteNice Doc....waiting for other parts....
ReplyDeleteIts very intriguing and i loved it
ReplyDeleteseems to be pretty interesting em lukin fwd to it coz the personalities are not yet clear
the secluded area or the table part is penned beautifully
update soon